Corrected some typo's and moved a paragraph.

docs/data/diagrams.tex

@@ -103,7 +103,7 @@
 
                 \node[block, below of=eventdriver, dashed] (analysis) {Event analysis}
                     edge[linefrom] (eventdriver)
-                    edge[linefrom] node[right=5] {events} (secondeventdriver);
+                    edge[linefrom] node[right=5pt] {events} (secondeventdriver);
                 \node[block, below of=analysis] {Application}
                     edge[linefrom] node[right, near start] {gestures} (analysis);
 

docs/report.tex

@@ -89,11 +89,7 @@ detection for every new gesture-based application.
 
     Chapter \ref{chapter:related} describes related work that inspired a design
     for the architecture. The design is presented in chapter
-    \ref{chapter:design}. Sections \ref{sec:multipledrivers} to
-    \ref{sec:daemon} define requirements for the architecture, and introduce
-    architecture components that meet these requirements. Section
-    \ref{sec:example} then shows the use of the architecture in an example
-    application. Chapter \ref{chapter:testapps} presents a reference
+    \ref{chapter:design}. Chapter \ref{chapter:testapps} presents a reference
     implementation of the architecture, an two test case applications that show
     the practical use of its components as presented in chapter
     \ref{chapter:design}. Finally, some suggestions for future research on the
@@ -153,11 +149,11 @@ detection for every new gesture-based application.
     The alternative to machine learning is to define a predefined set of rules
     for each gesture. Manoj Kumar \cite{win7touch} presents a Windows 7
     application, written in Microsofts .NET, which detects a set of basic
-    directional gestures based the movement of a stylus. The complexity of the
-    code is managed by the separation of different gesture types in different
-    detection units called ``gesture trackers''. The application shows that
-    predefined gesture detection rules do not necessarily produce unmanageable
-    code.
+    directional gestures based on the movement of a stylus. The complexity of
+    the code is managed by the separation of different gesture types in
+    different detection units called ``gesture trackers''. The application
+    shows that predefined gesture detection rules do not necessarily produce
+    unmanageable code.
 
     \section{Analysis of related work}
 
@@ -256,7 +252,7 @@ detection for every new gesture-based application.
     used.
 
     Because driver implementations have a common output format in the form of
-    events, multiple event drivers can run at the same time (see figure
+    events, multiple event drivers can be used at the same time (see figure
     \ref{fig:multipledrivers}). This design feature allows low-level events
     from multiple devices to be aggregated into high-level gestures.
 
@@ -272,8 +268,8 @@ detection for every new gesture-based application.
     an event takes place. User interfaces of applications that do not run in
     full screen modus are contained in a window. Events which occur outside the
     application window should not be handled by the application in most cases.
-    What's more, widget within the application window itself should be able to
-    respond to different gestures. E.g. a button widget may respond to a
+    What's more, a widget within the application window itself should be able
+    to respond to different gestures. E.g. a button widget may respond to a
     ``tap'' gesture to be activated, whereas the application window responds to
     a ``pinch'' gesture to be resized. In order to be able to direct a gesture
     to a particular widget in an application, a gesture must be restricted to
@@ -304,9 +300,9 @@ detection for every new gesture-based application.
     application logic, which is a tedious and error-prone task for the
     developer.
 
-    A better solution is to group events that occur inside the area covered by
-    a widget, before passing them on to a gesture detection component.
-    Different gesture detection components can then detect gestures
+    The architecture described here groups events that occur inside the area
+    covered by a widget, before passing them on to a gesture detection
+    component.  Different gesture detection components can then detect gestures
     simultaneously, based on different sets of input events. An area of the
     screen surface will be represented by an \emph{event area}. An event area
     filters input events based on their location, and then delegates events to
@@ -318,7 +314,7 @@ detection for every new gesture-based application.
     represented by two event areas, each having a different rotation detection
     component.
 
-    \subsection*{Callback mechanism}
+    \subsection{Callback mechanism}
 
     When a gesture is detected by a gesture detection component, it must be
     handled by the client application. A common way to handle events in an
@@ -333,38 +329,12 @@ detection for every new gesture-based application.
 
     \areadiagram
 
-    %Note that the boundaries of an area are only used to group events, not
-    %gestures. A gesture could occur outside the area that contains its
-    %originating events, as illustrated by the example in figure \ref{fig:ex2}.
-
-    %\examplefiguretwo
-
-    A remark must be made about the use of event areas to assign events to the
-    detection of some gesture. The concept of an event area is based on the
-    assumption that the set or originating events that form a particular
-    gesture, can be determined based exclusively on the location of the events.
-    This is a reasonable assumption for simple touch objects whose only
-    parameter is a position, such as a pen or a human finger. However, more
-    complex touch objects can have additional parameters, such as rotational
-    orientation or color. An even more generic concept is the \emph{event
-    filter}, which detects whether an event should be assigned to a particular
-    gesture detection component based on all available parameters. This level
-    of abstraction provides additional methods of interaction. For example, a
-    camera-based multi-touch surface could make a distinction between gestures
-    performed with a blue gloved hand, and gestures performed with a green
-    gloved hand.
-
-    As mentioned in the introduction chapter [\ref{chapter:introduction}], the
-    scope of this thesis is limited to multi-touch surface based devices, for
-    which the \emph{event area} concept suffices. Section \ref{sec:eventfilter}
-    explores the possibility of event areas to be replaced with event filters.
-
     \subsection{Area tree}
     \label{sec:tree}
 
-    The most simple usage of event areas in the architecture would be a list of
-    event areas. When the event driver delegates an event, it is accepted by
-    each event area that contains the event coordinates.
+    A basic usage of event areas in the architecture would be a list of event
+    areas. When the event driver delegates an event, it is accepted by each
+    event area that contains the event coordinates.
 
     If the architecture were to be used in combination with an application
     framework like GTK \cite{GTK}, each GTK widget that responds to gestures
@@ -378,12 +348,12 @@ detection for every new gesture-based application.
     structure. A root event area represents the panel, containing five other
     event areas which are positioned relative to the root area. The relative
     positions do not need to be updated when the panel area changes its
-    position. GUI frameworks, like GTK, use this kind of tree structure to
-    manage graphical widgets.
+    position. GUI frameworks use this kind of tree structure to manage
+    graphical widgets.
 
     If the GUI toolkit provides an API for requesting the position and size of
     a widget, a recommended first step when developing an application is to
-    create some subclass of the area that automatically synchronizes with the
+    create a subclass of the area that automatically synchronizes with the
     position of a widget from the GUI framework.
 
     \subsection{Event propagation}
@@ -430,10 +400,28 @@ detection for every new gesture-based application.
     When regular propagation is stopped, the event is propagated to other
     gesture detection components first, before actually being stopped.
 
-    \eventpropagationfigure
     \newpage
+    \eventpropagationfigure
 
-    \section{Detecting gestures from events}
+    The concept of an event area is based on the assumption that the set of
+    originating events that form a particular gesture, can be determined based
+    exclusively on the location of the events.  This is a reasonable assumption
+    for simple touch objects whose only parameter is a position, such as a pen
+    or a human finger. However, more complex touch objects can have additional
+    parameters, such as rotational orientation or color. An even more generic
+    concept is the \emph{event filter}, which detects whether an event should
+    be assigned to a particular gesture detection component based on all
+    available parameters. This level of abstraction provides additional methods
+    of interaction. For example, a camera-based multi-touch surface could make
+    a distinction between gestures performed with a blue gloved hand, and
+    gestures performed with a green gloved hand.
+
+    As mentioned in the introduction chapter [\ref{chapter:introduction}], the
+    scope of this thesis is limited to multi-touch surface based devices, for
+    which the \emph{event area} concept suffices. Section \ref{sec:eventfilter}
+    explores the possibility of event areas to be replaced with event filters.
+
+    \section{Detecting gestures from low-level events}
     \label{sec:gesture-detection}
 
     The low-level events that are grouped by an event area must be translated
@@ -555,14 +543,14 @@ start the GUI main loop in the current thread
 
     \examplediagram
 
-\chapter{Test applications}
+\chapter{Implementation and test applications}
 \label{chapter:testapps}
 
 A reference implementation of the design has been written in Python. Two test
 applications have been created to test if the design ``works'' in a practical
 application, and to detect its flaws. One application is mainly used to test
 the gesture tracker implementations. The other application uses multiple event
-areas in a tree structure, demonstrating event delegation and propagation. Teh
+areas in a tree structure, demonstrating event delegation and propagation. The
 second application also defines a custom gesture tracker.
 
 To test multi-touch interaction properly, a multi-touch device is required. The
@@ -710,9 +698,9 @@ first.
 
 \testappdiagram
 
-%\section{Discussion}
-%
-%\emph{TODO: Tekortkomingen aangeven die naar voren komen uit de tests}
+\section{Results}
+
+\emph{TODO: Tekortkomingen aangeven die naar voren komen uit de tests}
 
 % Verschillende apparaten/drivers geven een ander soort primitieve events af.
 % Een vertaling van deze device-specifieke events naar een algemeen formaat van
@@ -737,12 +725,12 @@ first.
 \label{sec:eventfilter}
 
 As mentioned in section \ref{sec:areas}, the concept of an event area is based
-on the assumption that the set or originating events that form a particular
+on the assumption that the set of originating events that form a particular
 gesture, can be determined based exclusively on the location of the events.
 Since this thesis focuses on multi-touch surface based devices, and every
 object on a multi-touch surface has a position, this assumption is valid.
 However, the design of the architecture is meant to be more generic; to provide
-a structured design of managing gesture detection.
+a structured design for managing gesture detection.
 
 An in-air gesture detection device, such as the Microsoft Kinect \cite{kinect},
 provides 3D positions. Some multi-touch tables work with a camera that can also
@@ -770,8 +758,8 @@ whether multi-touch gestures can be described in a formal way so that explicit
 detection code can be avoided.
 
 \cite{GART} and \cite{conf/gw/RigollKE97} propose the use of machine learning
-to recognizes gestures. To use machine learning, a set of input events forming
-a particular gesture must be represented as a feature vector. A learning set
+to recognize gestures. To use machine learning, a set of input events forming a
+particular gesture must be represented as a feature vector. A learning set
 containing a set of feature vectors that represent some gesture ``teaches'' the
 machine what the feature of the gesture looks like.
 
@@ -810,8 +798,8 @@ subject well worth exploring in the future.
 
 \section{Daemon implementation}
 
-Section \ref{sec:daemon} proposes the usage of a network protocol to
-communicate between an architecture implementation and (multiple) gesture-based
+Section \ref{sec:daemon} proposes the use of a network protocol to communicate
+between an architecture implementation and (multiple) gesture-based
 applications, as illustrated in figure \ref{fig:daemon}. The reference
 implementation does not support network communication. If the architecture
 design is to become successful in the future, the implementation of network
@@ -823,7 +811,7 @@ the basis for its communication layer.
 If an implementation of the architecture will be released, a good idea would be
 to do so within a community of application developers. A community can
 contribute to a central database of gesture trackers, making the interaction
-from their applications available for use other applications.
+from their applications available for use in other applications.
 
 Ideally, a user can install a daemon process containing the architecture so
 that it is usable for any gesture-based application on the device. Applications